My UFO WRITING

Kia ora everyone i have done lots of writing and was happy i finished

here i will show you my writing

Describe in detail the moment in time represented by the picture. 

Think about your character’s senses to help you add detail. What might they be seeing, touching, smelling, hearing, feeling and wondering?  

Challenge: Use this story starter (you can change the name)

With the world in ruins, they began to board the ship in hope of salvation…
One night in a heavy storm and Lightning howling in the sky and purple haze was moving waverley and big skyscrapers shaking and alarms going out in the city.Policemen zooming in the car with loud sirens and people are screaming as loud as thunder, the doctor and scientist calculating on the spaceship People are worried that they are going to be raised in the sky and the police are holding their shield.he people were Distracted,scared,unhappy and policemen are telling everyone to move so they don’t die and old people are shaking because of their sticks and all of the babies were crying as the  spaceship was blowing away the leaves and trees shaking   as the aliens were getting out of the spaceship and policemen holding their microphone and the aliens were bashing the whole city the city was in danger.Policemen were ordered to go to other city for more soldier because they had lots of soldier but the soldier could not wake up so they got help from lots country. And after 1 month and 1 week and 10 days of fighting and trying to stop all the people that were protecting everyone like scientists and doctors and policemen went back to the lab as the people were protesting and sleeping there. They all slept, dogs,cats,fish and other more animals were all sleeping quietly.The doctors,scientists and investigators study on the spaceship and found the way to solve the problem after weeks they found the solution and find a firework and pop it and the spaceship bombed away.With the world in ruins they had hope and patient and with it they began to study.The doctors,scientists and investigators study on the spaceship and found the way to solve the problem after weeks they found the solution and find a firework and pop it and the spaceship bombed away every one was hapyy and the city full with joy.The people were yelling in happiness and everyone had their kids and everyone had a piece of a pizza and the spaceship never came back to the city

 

 

 

 

Sentence 1

(describe your character)

 Policemen zoom in the car with loud sirens and people are screaming as loud as thunder, the doctor and scientist calculating on the spaceship.
Sentence 2

(describe the scene)

 Lightning howling in the sky and purple haze is moving waverley and big skyscraper shaking and alarms going out in the city.
Sentence 3

(Conflict – what is the problem?)

 People are worried that they are going to be raised in the sky and the police are holding their shield. 
Sentence 4

(Conflict – how does your character feel?)

 Distracted,scared,unhappy and policemen are telling everyone to move so they don’t die and old people are shaking because of their sticks.
Sentence 5

(resolution – how is the problem solved?)

 The doctors,scientists and investigators study on the spaceship and found the way to solve the problem after weeks they found the solution and find a firework and pop it and the spaceship bombed away.
Sentence 6

(how characters have changed)

 The people were yelling in happiness and everyone had their kids and everyone had a piece of a pizza and the spaceship never came back to the city

MY GOOGLE FISH

KIA ORA ITS KHALID HERE I HAVE MADE A DRAWING AND I WILL SHOW IT TO YOU

BLOG YA LATER(:)

MAX THE TAXI MAN WRITING

Here is a story about a boy that became the richest taxi driver in hotman city that was first a poor boy in his house then                                                         the merchant help them with the money and save the whole life of max BYE!!!(:

Write 6 sentences that detail who the story is about, where the story is set, what problem/conflict happens in the story, how they handle the problem, how the problem is solved and how the characters change.

Sentence 1

(describe your character)

 No taxi had happen in hotman city only by max the Taxi man
Sentence 2

(describe the scene)

 Tall apartment hold the city and birds sing in the trees and every did there job
Sentence 3

(Conflict – what is the problem?)

 No money no food only for the good man
Sentence 4

(Conflict – how does your character feel?)

 They were poor and had no money
Sentence 5

(resolution – how is the problem solved?)

 He becomes rich and helps his family and his brother’s family to become happy and rich.
Sentence 6

(how characters have changed)

 All thanks to the merchant that got the money from grandpa is so generous to us.

                                     

Max was a boy from hotman a city that had Tall apartment hold the city and birds sing in the trees and everyone did their job No taxi had happen in hotman city only by max the Taxi man max had No money no food only for the good man that came to the house here is the whole story once the family were busy then someone knock on the door and there was a man standing with the money and said here is money for your dad from your grandad max said dad come then the dad came and said thank you very much and then they closed the door then the little brother was on the phone with the mum then he said very loud mum come back we have so much money then mum closed the door.Then when they were counting the money mum bursted into the door and said where is the money give it now then max said mum go and have a shower and come we are going to go somewhere mum did what max said and they all left to get in the max said All thanks to the merchant that got the money from grandpa is so generous to us they reached the car store and bought the car then they went for ice cream and then the next day max did his first job it was not that much but he did what he did and then two months later he became hotman wide he was so rich he help his family do so much things then he became a billionaire and is very happy and will always thank the merchant his grandad and mum and dad.

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